| yue |
2008-02-09 06:49 |
whether you win or lose,but please remember to never give up.
How bored is those days!A strange relief(this part doen't make sense),I felt terrible inside (get rid of saddness, it sounds weird),I don't know why(perfect sentence).
Am I still the best?
Maybe sometimes I felt tired,I felt lonely inside.
What's the matter with me(换成what's wrong with me 也可以）?Am I too tired?I played alot （ALOT 不要分开写）those days,but I'm not happy at all.
'Is this Because I haven't done anything,I'm sad.Is that so?'I ask myself a zillion times.
Where and what is the answer?
Maybe this time(only one time no "S"I'm not gonna won.Am I afaird of it?I don't know.
Sometimes I will be strange(这里不知道怎么改doen't make any sense at all).
What have you done,what will you have.
......
Am I regret of what I have done?
But I could never change my past(换成GO BACK IN TIME 比较好）......
I fell better now,thank you,the other Me |
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