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楼主  发表于: 2007-11-02 19:29

【求助】帮忙看一下,这算不算Chinglish?

                                                      To myself


  Whatever the win or fail,but please remember never give up.
  How boring those days!A strange relax,I fell in a terrible sadness,I don't know why.
  Am I keeping the best?
  Maybe sometimes I feel tired,I fell in lonely.
  What's the matter with me?Am I too tired?I played a lot those days,but I'm not happy at all.
  'Because I haven't done anything,I'm sad.Is that so?'I ask myself times and times.
  Where and what is the answer?
  Maybe this times I will not be a winner.Am I afaird  of  it?I don't know.
  Sometimes I will be strange.
  What have you done,what will you have.
  ......
  Am I regret of what I have done?
  But I could never change my past......
  Now I feel better,thank you,Another Me.
同学说是chinglish,啊啊……
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沙发  发表于: 2008-02-01 16:15

第一句连个主语都没有呢///省略也不能成这样吧。。。